This is what I would do with the script if I can.

1. Withby Bay should be completed by the first lines from One More Lonly Night (when Johnathan begins the letter to Mina).
2. Bring back The First Taste.
3. Cut out the Modern World and keep A Perfect Life as solo song. No mixing with anything.
4. You've Already Loved Me mix with Please Don't Make Me Love You.
5. Bring back old version of Nosferatu.
6. Bring back Mina's Mist (Reprise) after Lucy is killed.
7. Keep The Heart Is Slow To Learn before the Seduction and cut If I Could Fly.
8. Bring back lost lyrics of I Always Know What He's Thinkig and make a reprise of it when Mina meets with Renfield.
9. Make Deep In The Darkest Night more a solo song for Van Helsing.

Well, I personaly don't agree with those changes :P This is what I would do (to the official Graz script):

1. Get a new, longer overture that allowed to have images of Dracula and Mina before he turns into a Vampire. (like it's done in The Count of Monte Cristo) Kinda like the Coppolla film where Frank got a lot of inspiration. Otherwise people won't really understand why on earth a man that has lived hundreds of years falls madly in love with a woman just based on a picture.

2. Cut Modern World yes, but leave A perfect life mixed with Loving you. It's one of the best songs in the show.

3. Add a new song for Arthur after Lucy's "death", before Life after Life. Honestly, the man loved her so much, it's unbelievable he doesn't have a single word to say when he sees his beloved die.

4. Reintroduce "The mist (reprise)" after the cemetery scene and before "Please don't make me love you".

5. Cut "Roseanne" and add a reprise of "Nosferatu".

6. Add Jonathan to "It's Over" instead of a duett Dracula/Van Helsing adding also the man who's watching his wife being seduced...

I must say I love the fact that all three Lucy's men have no solo song. It is good. Even for Arthur. They are not so important characters.

I agree that Roseanne should be cut.

It's Over is a great song. I realy love it. But I think it is prolonging the very fast moment after Seduction and it is wrong. Fighting of Dracula and Van Helsing (or Harker) should be very short and strong. When they are running from one side to another and singing and sining for several minutes - I don't like it at all.